"My words are like my breath
Watch my words come
As my heart beats as the words fall "
You have a true Poet heart. Your words are kind and sweet bringing hope and calm to the reader. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
This one was one of my favorite ones to write taking the meaning of the written words and put my tru.. read moreThis one was one of my favorite ones to write taking the meaning of the written words and put my true feeling on it thank you Coyote
Oh yes, the insanity quelled by the pen... I can feel you with this one. The emotions here hit so close to home that I am seriously effected by the words.
There is no end to my words
Words that speak (an) unspoken voice
When I can(')t stand
My words will stand out -- this is the true immortality of a poet, or artist in general. This is why I chose to go into the arts, not because of money, fame, praise...but because I feel the need to touch people emotionally and hope that one day these shreds of mine will live on.
Great depth in this write, flows we all hope that our words says something about us and hope they speak ...
Posted 11 Years Ago
You really did a write with much dept my friend, litterally, a maze to explore, I like the cleverness of it, and the wordplay, even I as a Dutch, can learn here much... but the message is clear to me... :) thank you for being so creative.
Thank you dear Elisa this one came out of left field... But one of my many favorites i am glad that .. read moreThank you dear Elisa this one came out of left field... But one of my many favorites i am glad that you enjoyed it
This magnificent piece reminds me of many aspects of the "word", also in the New testament, if you love words, you`ll love the deep meaning behind them and the sense, and the love for the pure deeds, hope, simple joy of writing and sharing...Great poem!
Hi My name is Kelsey, I have a mild form of Cerbral Palsey and i did not choose to be given this but i live with it proudly I love sports sense i cant play them i like to watch them.. I do not judge .. more..