Faded Love

Love came out in our kiss 

Trust was gained 

You let my heart beat faster 

Just to slow it down 

Beliveing love is nothing 

You played me like a fiddle 

Like my heart was nothing 

My love was 

As real as these words 

Letting you know i am though 

Our love is faded 

Keeping secrets 

Hurt more then the truth

Faded love 

Is where we stand 

Your eyes were nothing but lies 

A life of love come and goes 

Like a hidden path 

We must not search 

Or a bunch of lies 

Will break 

The bridge our hearts will have to mend 

Reviews

[KeelyJane]

We have penned the same emotion.
I think most have. It's always interesting to read how other people put the same feeling into words.
How unfortunate that heartbreak is so common. I suppose the only perk is that it makes for great poetry.

[A Soap Mess Stories]

So sad when love goes wrong. Beautifully written.

[Lover Of Words]

Greatly apprecated

[Zeverin Kpai]

too bad that the search was called off. I don't know if anyone knows the truth that is unbearable.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you sir

[AdorableDreams]

Awhh a broken heart feels so painful! I have that now. But your poem is very nice. Keep up the good work.

[Lover Of Words]

I will deffently thank you for the review

[AdorableDreams]

that is so sweet ;)

[quinfinn]

"my love was as real as these words, letting you know i am though" did you mean "letting you know i am through"? i love this poem, the sincerity shines like a beacon. good work!

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks Quinn

[quinfinn]

my pleasure, sweetheart

[InsanityWriter]

So sad but beautiful... Well written piece.

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks dear

[Jack...]

So very sad yet so beautifully written. I would say if this is from a real life experience the one you write of was the loser in this deal, for this poet carries a deep and loving heart. Very nice my friend.

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks Jack!!!!

[Sami Khalil]

I like this poem along with the format and the background ...Bravo...:)

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks :) appreciate it

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....

[Felicity's Eve]

Some people can be so cruel.... Shattering our hearts and leaving unfading scars...

Lovely poem. :)

P.s. 'I' should be capitalized in line 10 ;)

100/100