Wind Of wisdom

The wind conceals my secrets 

Speaks to me like lost love 

Holds my pain 

But justifies the wisdom 

The wind carries me to places 

No other creature can consume 

Consume my bodies weakness 

And keeps my feet on solid ground 

But carries me way 

To my searcher of freedom 

Faith holds me tight 

To keep my life at ease 

Takes my wings to a calm place 

The wind conceals the out come of these wings 

I hold closely to my soul 

My wings of wisdom 

My wings of life 

Reviews

[Baby Ricochet]

Profound poem Kelsey. Great write

[Lover Of Words]

Much appreciated baby thank you

[Lover Of Words]

I found this so deep, and beautiful dear Kelsey! I read it as I'm almost too a little particle of dust among the fields... a transparent and well written short poem!


- Elisa

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you dear Elisa i appreciate it so much

You are very welcome Kels :Dx

[InsanityWriter]

Beautiful. It flows as does the wind... :)

[Lover Of Words]

This one came out as if it was meant to be... I thank you my lovely friend

[ShelleyA]

I love the title. A beautiful write. Heartfelt and introspective. Skillfully crafted free verse which I enjoy. Nice use of metaphor and simile. Nice personification of the wind. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice as is the use of repetition for emphasis of feeling. Good alliteration, assonance and consonance. Good closing lines. Well penned and a much enjoyed read.

[Lover Of Words]

Wow what a review i thank you so much for taking the time to read :)

[ShelleyA]

You're welcome and my pleasure.

[quinfinn]

this is truly one of the best pieces i have seen from you in some time. nicely expressed!

[Lover Of Words]

I greatly appreciate it this one just flowed out of me unsure where it came from but had to share it thank you so much

[quinfinn]

good to see you back and writing again

[Lover Of Words]

Take my pen away from me it would be like taking my heart

[quinfinn]

if you take away a poet's pen, he or she will merely write with their heart....

[Lover Of Words]

Yes this is true my friend

[Sami Khalil]

"The wind conceals my secrets
Speaks to me like lost love
Holds my pain
But justifies the wisdom "
That is some good poetry ...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you so much :) thanks for reading

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:).........