Heartbreak Highway

I let you enter 

In different ways then the others 

Just have the fire i felt 

blown out like the snapping of your fingers 

The twist and turns 

Of your heart break ties 

Has broken mine to no end 

No return 

Question of love 

Lost in the highway of us 

The ups 

The downs

Can my heart take much more 

On this road with this man 

Who ended my belief in love 

Will the travel of this heart break end 

I gave into your magic 

And i get blown out like the wind 

I will always question the hopes of us 

On this heart break highway 

I am stuck 

At a stand still 

with a non repairable heart 

Reviews

[A Soap Mess Stories]

You've managed to sum up my marriage with this piece. Wonderful!

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you :)

[Infinity Blues]

Heartbreak....A s****y place to be, and many emotions to overwelming. And yet, so common is that place where we all go, often, more than once. Beautiful write, keep it up.
-Infinity

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you

[quinfinn]

sometimes you just have to pull into a rest area and take a break from that highway of love...well penned, dear Kelsey.

[Coyote Poetry]

Heartbreak hotel is a common place for the most of us. We give love with hope of forever and the gift will be return back to us. I like the description in the poem. I felt the disappointment. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you so much

[Felicity's Eve]

Lovely. Just lovely. So much emotion in such a well-written poem. :)

It would make an amazing ballad ^^

[Lover Of Words]

I am very apprecaited of your reveiw i will see what i can do

[Felicity's Eve]

:) No pressure or anything. It's your poem ^^

[Sami Khalil]

"The twist and turns
Of your heart break ties
Has broken mine to no end
No return
Question of love "
A nice poem and those are my favorite lines...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks for reading :)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Baby Ricochet]

give it some chords and a chorus and you've got a balled

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks for the advice :)