Breathe

I breathe and I know your around 

Your sweet intoxicated hug 

I breathe in your love 

I breathe in your hate 

You tore at my heart 

I breathe you in 

I exhale at the sign of pain 

Theres a chill in my bones 

From the content fear 

I breathe in a love hate relationship 

When will i ever know when to stop 

You consume me 

In a mystical way 

I breathe in your power 

Now i know the weakness 

Is you 

One day 

I will 

Breathe 

I sigh of relief 

Reviews

[Sir Joseph]

This piece has a ton of meaning to me! It is something that i wanted to say and write but you beat me to it haha Bravo :)

[Lover Of Words]

Hahah thank you

[CreativeStroke]

This was good Kelsey. I liked the concept and your ability to make a nice flow out of your words. Well done!

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and amazing poem. The description brought to life emotion and desire in your words. Some people will always leave us breathless and in confusion. It can be a good thing. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks Coyote

[The Nude Writer]

Another killer. You hit me right in the heart.

[Lover Of Words]

Glad you liked it dear :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Nice piece. Just don't start breathing in diesel fumes.

[Lover Of Words]

lol i wont

[Sami Khalil]

"You consume me

In a mystical way

I breathe in your power ."
I love those lines but also the whole...:)

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[quinfinn]

i would never stay in a love/hate relationship...it is futility and just plain self effacing. the time to breathe is now! dump the garbage and clean the house.....clever write, Kelsey

[Lover Of Words]

Lol this is not about a man... Thanks Quin

[quinfinn]

another puppy love poem? whatever....

[Lover Of Words]

Ill PM you and explain