Unleash Me

Unleash me from this burden 

Free me from the devil

Nothing would be better 

Then to be dropped from the fire

Jumped from a bridge 

Landed on the thorns of the captured ones 

Unleash the fighter 

Unleash the winner of the losing battle

The sensuality of love and passion 

Is  flowing though my  vains 

My freedom to release the lust between two passanate lovers 

Kisses release an sweet release

Unleash the beast in me 

And see where the animal in me goes 

Just unleash me 

And I promise 

To behave

Unleash the fire 

Unleash me 

Please I beg of you 

To let me feel the power of freedom

Reviews

[@zeewhykay]

Powerful piece, a caged animal wanting so desperately to be free. The beast inside rattling the bars of it's cage. Well done.

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks

[Dr. Wood ?]

be careful what you wish for..Ha ha..just joking...this is very powerful..pretty good O would say..there are a few typos however..VAINS?...should be VEINS...PASSANATE?...PASSIONATE ...AN sweet release should surely be A sweet release...Easy to do..must be..I do it all the time

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks

[The Nude Writer]

Wow.. A wonderfully sensual and wild poem :) I love it

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you dear friend

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

A ride on the west-wind's mane
A seat on Wendy's aunt Gelda's broomstick
...interesting is freedom....freedom is an inkless pen.

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

ok

[KeeD]

this poem takes you from point a to point b..but that journey in between is what it feels like to be human, captured but breaking free, hurt but finding ways to love, this is a beautiful piece.

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you very much

[Baby Ricochet]

I like the unleash the beast in me part. Reminds me of a line I wrote somewhere "Beast on a leash." I like the way it ends too, from just unleash me. The thing with the beast is as soon as it's out people start yelling to put it back in it's cage.

[Lover Of Words]

haha yes this is true.... Thanks Baby

[quinfinn]

unleash the beast....well, this is reckless abandon in its purest form. be careful you don't hurt yourself (or anyone else)....nicely done!

[Lover Of Words]

Im a nice little beast Quin I wont hurt anyone :) thank you

[quinfinn]

groooooooooooowrrr.....

[Lover Of Words]

hahaha im not that beastly yet lol

[Phoenix]

wow this poem would fit one of my character in entered so well. and well done

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you!!