Faithful Angels

As the night falls. 

The numbing chills set in.

Ablitly to think takes a wild turn,

The words needing too speak comes to a griding hault.

As if locked in chains

Aware of the demons in my head.

I let my gaurd down. 

As the forbidden gates open. 

Welcomed into the land of unknown

No way to stop my fears.

Giving them control.

Letting my faithful guard down

Angels of faith come a flying from above.

Taking my hand and guiding my soul out of the black whole.

Arose my halo of gold.

Realizing where this life of mine goes

To help find the light of others.

As the night falls 

The light shines.

And i raise above.

The dark swims in my vains.

Since I have my angel.

And my halo, my vibrant light.

The dark will surely

Not appear again.

Reviews

[Alexis]

This is a wonderful piece, indeed. You used very vibrant words, which made the piece even better. I will try to read the rest of your work (: you have such good writing abilities!

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you dear

[Tarry Franck]

This is amazing - Love this pictures. Just need to make some minor changes as KAO said.
Hell, almost made my own mistake in this review LOL

[Lover Of Words]

LOL thank you :)

[KAOlmsted]

"The words needing too speak comes to a griding hault." Should read "The words needing TO speak 'come' to a 'grinding' 'halt'." Also, 'veins' in place of 'vains' Otherwise, pretty decent write. Thanks for sharing it with us.

-kimmer

[Lover Of Words]

Thanks

[KAOlmsted]

My pleasure.

[The Analog Kid]

Nice descriptions of the good/evil. Angels always rise above!

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you!

[The Analog Kid]

Sure!

[Whiskurz]

Creatively Beautiful......Whisk

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the tale in the poem. Good to be saved and be protected. The artwork gave life to your words. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you!!!!!

[Frieda P]

Haunting and sweet at the same time...you've got a few typo's but that didn't even bother my OCD since this is so lovely!! ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

Wow im glad you liked it!! I didnt mix up TOO and TO this time!! :-)

[Frieda P]

ha, I got you nervous now eh? haha just enjoy your writing! ;-)

[Lover Of Words]

Yes you did get me nervous now i am afraid too get them mixed up hahaha ;-) but i am glad you liked it!