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And the stars in the sky
pull me closer to you
while we lay on cold cement
in the streets where water kills fire
and my eyes pierce your skin.
You look at me so distinctively
like I flooded your thoughts
and burned all your dreams.
But your hair still stands on end
when I grace your body with my lips
and you hold me as if I was a statue in the wind.

Reviews

[Christopher.Holmberg]

and you hold me as if I was a statue in the wind.

wow.

[wolfshrew]

the last line is what made this wonderful, i really enjoyed this

[x]

ouu, I had to read this with my eyes closed...lol.
Such a private moment and so generous of you to invite a peek.
Overall, the write is full of glimpses of attraction in action.
Well done..

[Jibey]

The image of the statue in the wind is striking and intriguing... and I loved the idea of his body being graced by your lips...