Her blue eyes stare at me

I did a poem already with this theme and stuff but it's different words so tell me what u think, thanks :)

Her blue eyes stare at me 

With wonder and hope

 My heart breaks a little 

But I still turn around and go.  

Her blue eyes stare at me

With confusion and fear

 My heart breaks a little more 

But I'm told to leave her alone.  

Her blue eyes stare at me 

With awe and joy 

 As I ignore the others, 

And  start to walk to her. 

Their brown eyes glare at me

 With hatred and distrust 

But I don't care what they think

 For the decision is mine.   

Author's Note

I did a poem already with this theme and stuff but it's different words so tell me what u think, thanks :)