The girl with the blue eyes

I see her stare at me

her blue eyes piercing,

she looks so lonely,

so sad and cold,

my mother tells me i cant go.

I see her stare at me

her blue eyes bruised,

her hair not brushed,

her rags all torn,

her cheeks not flushed.

I see her stare at me

her blue eye begging,

Oh, i want to go to her so bad!

but my mother warns me

and makes me ignore her silent pleas.

I see her stare at me

her blue eyes filled with envy

she walks across the snow

to my small bedroom window

She taps it and says Hello.

I see her stare at me

her blue eyes filled with happiness and surprise,

as i take her hand and show,

her the world 

she would have never known.

Author's Note

reviews please =)

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Unbelievably remarkable. The way you added each stanza changes the mood and shows the clear emotions that they're feeling. Some people are cruel and care for their own self righteousness. Great poem. It shows something new.

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with some good wisdom to be learn from the words. Hard for children to understand when another is homeless and have less. Too bad the adults couldn't keep the mind of a child. Be kind and share the warmth of a better world with the people who need assistance. I like the ending to the outstanding poem.
Coyote