Red Roses

my friend wrote this and i liked it, so hopefully u guys will 2 :)

roses as far as the eye can see
raindrops cover each petal
it is pretty as can be
red, deep red, oh wonderful red
covers each rose gracefully
but the rose had just sprouted wings
and flies away
where an old woman sits
and she sees the wonderful thing
her eyes grow bigger
and she begins to sing
her day
turns glorious
and the rose is victorious 
 

Author's Note

its not my writing, but plz comment!

Reviews

[For my life I write]

well its pretty good, i am not in love with it, not sure why. but it is interesting....