I win. You lose.

about how people try to make you down, but in the end you can always make them lose and you win.

You try to make me fall,

but I block you with my wall,

I win. You lose.

You try to hear me sing,

but i block you with my wings,

I win. You lose.

You try to make me cry,

but no salty tears come to my eyes,

I win. You lose.

You try to get me mad,

but, I don't even feel bad!

I win. You lose.

You try to make me jump,

but of course you don't succeed,

I don't even bleed.

I win. You lose.

I won.

You lost.

Reviews

[Dove]

Congrats you won! lol. This is a great poem, the flow was great and I like the concept of it. Never let anyone get you down.

[Mickey]

thank you!

[Tanya7]

great poem. really like it