As I Fall

I find it hard

To go on

I am too weak

I am not strong

My world is a mess

From up to down

I can not handle this stress

I am astound

I finally found

My terrible match

I can not take

This eventful batch

The pain is over-bearing

Taking me apart

And I feel the world staring

As I fall

Reviews

[My Wildest Dreams]

I disagree. I like it a lot!! Especially since I feel like I can relate sometimes. For that, I give you a 98 :]

[Sukriti Suki]

some of the rhyming seems a bit forced..but overall a good idea.