Tease Me!

Tease Me!

A Poem by Queen of Hearts

Sure, tease me.

See what I care,

Cus you have a booger,

And theres something in your hair.

 

Sure, I'm stupid.

At least I'm not making an F!

Yep, I'm clumsy,

But at least I can walk a step!

 

Okay, I mess up when I speak,

Your no better!

But I can write correctly,

And not mess up a letter!

 

When you say something,

You tend to spit.

I dont tease you though,

Not even a little bit!

 

Just because I'm not perfect,

And are real,

And because you act 24/7,

Doesn't mean you should make such a big deal.

 

So, go on ahead,

Tease and be mean if you must,

Will I walk away,

And leave you in the dust!

© 2010 Queen of Hearts


Author's Note

Queen of Hearts
This is a poem I made up, it has been ringing in my head for awhile, and I wanted to put it up.

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A direct and to the point poem. No sweet words are mixed in. I like the feel and statement made to be left alone. The ending was very good. "And leave you in my dust." A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That was really good. GREAT job!!!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I love to paint and write stories. Sometimes I just sit and write all day, trying to get out of this land and into another. I love the smell of the paper as I write, the soft etching sound of the penc.. more..

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