Teddy Bear

Short story about a girl and her bear, and an evil Orphan Maiden.

  The evil Orphan Maiden threw it into the pond, and grinned. The girl fell to her knees and burst out crying. It was the only item she had left from her mother. The Maiden grinned at the little girl. This was why she volenteered for the orphanige. The pain. She craved it, lived off of it, and was what she needed. But, then the girl did something unexpected. She jumped in after it.

    The cold water surrounded the girl, and she shivered, but she had to get to the bottom of the deep pond for her doll. The water stung her eyes, and she strained to see her doll, she reached her hand at the bottom of the pool, and felt the wet fur of her teddy bear. She grabbed it and hugged it close. She felt dizzy and airless, and needed to get up to the top. She stood upright and pushe her bare feet at the bottom of the rocky pond. As she reached the top, she felt the air rush through her lungs, and she felt herself getting lifted out of the water.

    The Orphan Maiden was mad. She could not deal with getting disobeyed, and wanted to kill the girl. Sadly, she could not hold in her emotions, and strangled the girl to death. But, the girl was not mad, for she was with her teddy bear, and was being sent up with her mom.

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         The girl was scared at first, but walked through the fires like the man had said. Then she saw big gates. She did not know what they were for, but she entered anyway. Her mom greeted her, and walked her through the beautiful gates, and the girl was happy, for she had her teddy bear, and her mommy.

Author's Note

Depressing, sorta. Please Tell me what you think!

Reviews

[happy girl]

awwwww it's so sad but yet so beautiful at the end