Oh, I Thought

I thought, I thought...

I thought you would be a muse

or perhaps a hero in my piece

I thought you would make use

of an angel instead of beast

Oh, I thought you are a man

with a heart so true and pure

I thought you aren't a gun

nor a disease without a cure

I thought you cannot lie

hurt, or bring me to tears

Oh, you dare to let me die

You are murderous for years 

Oh, I thought you are the one

the man I see in the crystal

I thought you are my sun

but I realized I'm going mental

I thought you're different

with a unique heart and soul

I thought you're real and reverent

but being 'someone' was not your role

I thought you're better than them

who play with our hearts so chaste

Oh, you rudely destroyed a gem

you put my faith in you to waste

A great suppressor, yes you really are

I don't deserve the pain you have brought

I am glad we will be afar

I thought you aren't a murderer! Oh, I thought! 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime our muses can love us or mistreat us. A muse can wear the clothing of a demon or angel? I like your thoughts. Open the door to a long and good conversation. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Kelsey]

This was unique and quite lovely to read. It had a great flow and was very nicely written. Nice job. x

[G!o]

Well written and reflective...it bites the thought of a reader. I enjoyed this.

[WingsToFly]

nicely done and expressive

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

your figurative way of looking at things is pretty unique and your use of repetition is pretty nice. The idea you used isn't new but I liked how you newly presented it. Your thoughts are very intriguing and you have risen a reflective questions in my head which is a mark of accomplishment for an author and a reader.

Well done

[Dayran]

Such plentiful thoughts of a person we once loved. Did you tell HIM that? It would have helped but now ... Well conveyed though.

[Tai Ryens]

Hm, I see that you've evolved through the poem. Mentally. Your telling of the tale changes in tone drastically. I like it.

[khalid]

oh woww..so much depression and frustration expressed in a very nice way..

[Baby Ricochet]

Heartache's a b***h. The trouble with people in crystals is they got shot through a woman's vagina into the same fucked up world the rest of us did and are liable to the same faults, fears and temptations we all face. They are all but guaranteed to screw up our fantasies as we are there's. That's the trouble with fantasies. Good poem. Nice rhyming

[patricia]

Honest and Real. Disappointment vented and shared with many who will identify. I could hear the hurt hidden in your misplaced trust.