To the Highest Exponent

For the most amazing educator I've met

Math was never my favorite,
Yet you made me fascinated.
I thought I would never make it,
But you kept me motivated.

I would never forget your values,
Your advice, your talks.
I would treasure them, your virtues,
I would even impart them to my folks.

You are indeed amazing.
Yes, you are that famous.
Many want to hear you teaching,
But some just can't help but be jealous.

We are champions with you.
You brought out the best in us.
You let us see the world in a different view.
Yes, yet the time was so fast.

In school, you became our hue.
Our love for you will never die.
No one wants to be left by you.
No one didn't weep when you bade goodbye.

We'll cherish every moment we all spent.
We love you to the highest exponent.

Author's Note

I didn't check on my diction that well because I'm eager to publish this. Oh, I'll appreciate your rates and reviews. Excuse my errors. :)

Reviews

[Meallea Pomorette]

This brought tears to my eyes... I really missed "that man"... Even though I always fell asleep in his class, he knows how to keep me awake through his jokes... I must admit he even caught me eating once during English...

"Math was never my favorite,
Yet you made me fascinated."
It's not even my favorite but I always look forward to his time because it was always lively...

"you are that famous."
It's true that his name is really famous...

"But some just can't help but be jealous."
A happy :P to them...

"No one didn't weep when you bade goodbye."
We can always see him when he is not busy right???

"We love you to the highest exponent."
It is positive infinity... Not negative... I better stop before I rant about logarithms and the like...
Nice write...
(^_^)

[Lunette Lariz]

HAHAHA, ikr? Thanks! :)

[Caitlynn Cusick]

i have no connection with the math part, but the rest, yes i understand... very good

[HuntertheWolf]

i found this would make more sence if you wrote who you were writeing about but still i liked to imagine who and what they were like still you get 9 out of 10 wolfs

[Lunette Lariz]

Haha, thnks.

[DrD]

A nice homage piece, Lunette that was enjoyable. I would like to point out the double negative in "No one didn't . . . ." Why not simply "Everyone wept?" But again, a pleasure to read and a job well done.

[Lunette Lariz]

Oh, thanks for that Sir! :)

[ms. barrie]

this is a very endearing, emotive poem, great flow and i enjoy your unique word choice, with pleasing rhymes. great write, thanks for sharing

[Lunette Lariz]

Thanks! :)

[patricia]

An admirable tribute to your peer expressed in a form that sells this personality to all who read. This is a snowball of a poem it gathers positive emotion as it goes. Enjoyed.

[Lunette Lariz]

Thanks! :)

[khalid]

math is hard but it is really important, it is the real mind challenging subject, it is the real measurement of inteligence and that is why you feel brilliant when you feel yourself good at math...
very nicely penned
thank you

[Lunette Lariz]

Thank you also. :)

[Jordan's Back]

beautiful tribute

[Lunette Lariz]

Thank you. :)

[Kuhr Gred]

".....I thought I would never make it,
But you kept me motivated."

I like this.. I got inspire in this phrase.. as an engineer student, MATH is our greatest battle.. but after all, We love it. because it will helpful in our everyday life.. haha in short "MAGANDA ang POEM mo" hahaha anyway, thank you sa add..
-Kuhr gred

[Lunette Lariz]

Walang anuman! :) Salamat din sa review. =)))

[Ravyne Hawke]

Nice tribute poem. I think we all have one teacher that brings out the best in us. very nice job.

[Lunette Lariz]

Yes indeed. Thank you! :)

[C.C. Marx]

Awe how sweet I had a math teacher I absolutely loved and this reminds me of him great job :)

[Lunette Lariz]

I'm so glad my poem reminded you of him. :') Thanks all the same. :))

[C.C. Marx]

Your very welcome

[Lunette Lariz]

:)