We are asked to write a poem which will be the basis of our graduation hymn. And yeah, I didn't feel this one. I just shared it to you guys, and I know I will receive feed backs containing corrections and all. Feel free to say it. Again, I didn't feel this one and I wrote this for the sake of passing because I didn't have enough inspiration. Ergh, I hate my senior life, that's why.
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I enjoyed reading this very much. I'm not sure why you felt that there would be anything to correct with it. I don't write poetry, so take this with a grain of salt, but I thought it was great :).
I hope you got a good grade on it. It's worth far more than just a pass.
Thanks for sharing!
I enjoyed reading this very much. I'm not sure why you felt that there would be anything to correct with it. I don't write poetry, so take this with a grain of salt, but I thought it was great :).
I hope you got a good grade on it. It's worth far more than just a pass.
Thanks for sharing!
I find this to be a very encouraging poem, a positive poem. The rhyming and imagery are well done. Only one place did I find the need for correction.. stanza 4, last line: "I valued life, learned not be cruel." I would add a "to be cruel". It just makes it flow better and is correct grammar. Other than that, this is a fine poem, one you should be proud of.
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