lost

dont know

Water and whitenoise, misplacing me. Sent to lose all my senses.

Coming back with clarity. With thoughts more thought than I could handle.

Should I live now or dream of tomorrow? Wasted time is not worthwhile.

Vivid memories being made, or borrowed till another day.

Wash it off and move on again. Cause thats the only way I can.

 

Reviews

[♥ Courtney &hear..]

as a whole the piece is nice but definitely work on your grammar a bit, also it might become easier for readers to follow your work if you would center your work and write downwards like traditional poetry rather than in paragraph form.

[Wolfbaby]

Your message in the poem got through pretty well, but you should work a little on your grammar. Remember to capitalize I's. Good work so far. :D

~Wolfbaby