Move Along

Cry for whats left, for what its worth, but they won't hear you, not even you. Faded and screened behind the past, for what's to come is always known last. Last or first, its all the same, finding your place in this game. Win or lose your lost and abused. Addicted to anything but truth.

Move along is the saying to live by, it's all you do until you die. Then why question it? or stop to cry or have a fit? What's done is done it may seem s**t, but time rolls on, right over it. Find some more or stop to stare. But in the end who will care? what's did is done and done is gone, so shut the f**k up, and move along.

Reviews

[No.]

I love the rhythm you've used here. I can really feel the piece rolling, moving, living. So good.

[Samantha]

great piece of work! I liked how it rhymed but still was powerful and emotion filled. Great job! I enjoyed it!

[Flo]

thats a really nice piece, favorite! :)

keep writing, your a talent

-Flo

[Ashley]

I also see life in this manner. Wish everyone would have this look on life, would make the world a better place.