Deep in the sea

Love should be more deep than the sea

Lips parted fresh from the fire

Touched each other with the delicate desire

The unrestrained waves active in the mouth

Lips smoothened its move towards south

The epochal dreams are made and broken

The mighty castles in the air shaken

The souls agitated to a higher rage

What the ultimate

The destiny is under the blaze

And blissfully everything receded to a haze

And the world turned into a new phase

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

The waves of desire carry us to different levels of bliss and then turning our world into that ultimate phase :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you expressed your desire and the strong description in this short poem. I had to read a few times to enjoy the language and how you expressed the feelings and the desire of this outstanding poem.
Coyote