The alarm Bell

The alarm Bell

A Poem by kdpgrahi

Happy to see a six feet rabbit
While I am busy wandering a bit
I was figuring out from corner of my eye
though it is the duty of an expert spy
Something is protruding with an hassle
I am sure it is none other than a pistol
Suddenly heard a gunshot and a punch on my arse
While I am confidently eating the grass
I wondered what is it, beyond my vision
And am desperate to know
Is it the Human season?

© 2011 kdpgrahi


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Ah what a haunting question that is! This is very interesting. I have never read a poem from the perspective of a rabbit. I think that takes an imaginative mind to get into the mindset of a rabbit, an animal, who does not have, obviously, the capabilities that we do. Great write

Posted 13 Years Ago


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@ Blue Moon Ice Cream,
You have rightly interpreted. You have all the poetic feelings. Thanks

Posted 13 Years Ago


I have to admit, I am a little bit confused...I'm not too good at interpreting poetry sometimes. Is this from a hunted rabbit's point of view? That's how I understood it. It's not really my style of poetry, but I like this...it's distinctive.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it, but the flow is kind of hard to go through.
thank you Moon Fixer

Posted 13 Years Ago


Indeed the human season! We become human "beings" bright spot in my day this poem delights.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is excellent KD, yes it is the Human Season

Posted 13 Years Ago


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