The Beam of Light

Among all the chaos there definitely a beam of hope even thoughit looks faint

Every where I look.

There are signs of a struggle,

The mails has been scattered

All over the kitchen floor.

Milks overturned

The phone has been knocked off

its pedestal, its battery pack

hanging loose from an umbilicus of wires

Some sparrows are as chirpy

As in an Indian Railway platform

There is a single beam of Light

At the other end

though meticulously fainted

And some whispers at the threshold,

"There's a good time coming my friend"

Reviews

[Crystal Kelly]

Very good description i can see the scene you paint it so vividly. I like the line "There's a good time coming my friend". I like this poem.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I like the description of the room. I think it fits perfectly. I can feel hope shining through in the poem. I think you did a really nice job. Thanks for sharing.

[Sherwette]

It brings some hope!

[A.E. Surdam]

Wow, crazy scene. I like. A very interesting and refreshing new poem. Great job!

[Veronica Chandler]

You set the stage nicely, and the, a "There is a single beam of light at the other end" A lovely ray of hope. I enjoyed the work.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Very interesting poem of chaos and hope.......well done KD