Somewhere

Somewhere

A Poem by Keith's Ramblings
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A poignant poem

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She sits and stares
unfocused eyes swimming to the horizon,
gazing into infinity.

No sign of tears,
her expressionless face an empty canvas.
a sea of pallor.


I look into her eyes.
I see nothing but a swirling mist of grey,
that sparkle gone.


I try to ask her why.
A cloud of despair envelopes her,
she hears me not.


But I will wait.
I’ll stay by her side for as long as it takes
for her to return.


But for now,
she inhabits a sorrowful place of her own.


Somewhere.


I know not where.

© 2022 Keith's Ramblings


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The poignancy of this poem is incredible. Keith, you have captured the 2 faces of this soul-sucking predicament so beautifully. I immediately connected and remembered my aching heart while going through the same with both my father and grandmother.

Superb poem

Ken e

Posted 2 Years Ago


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The poignancy of this poem is incredible. Keith, you have captured the 2 faces of this soul-sucking predicament so beautifully. I immediately connected and remembered my aching heart while going through the same with both my father and grandmother.

Superb poem

Ken e

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poignancy is overridden by the stubborn cast of emotional not-there-ness or at least not externally expressed which has a stonewall effect on the heart of the carer. Deeply moving. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very poigniant. Love, waiting for a reaction.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Keith's Ramblings
Keith's Ramblings

Bexhill-on-Sea, East Sussex, United Kingdom



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