Tonights Validtiction

Tonights Validtiction

A Poem by Forever Mine
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My life

Your bite

 

Liquid red

Dripping down

 

Stalking Night

Sleeping Light

 

Silky Love

Wonderous groom

 

Moonlight Skin

Ruby Lips

 

Perfect guy

Tonight's goodbye

 

Tactful lies

Painful Validictions

 

 

© 2010 Forever Mine


Author's Note

Forever Mine
I'm reading Dracula right now, So I thought I would do something in the spirit of halloween

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perfect painting-
the sensuality/eroticism/and
bloody sexuality slithers creatively/
in this atmospheric piece !
:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


This flows real well. It's real easy to read, it just rolls off the tongue. Great work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Interesting.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very erie and mysterious are your words... very sensual and yet with a touch of pain.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Mmmmmmm. This sounded really good.....until the end!
Interesting stuff!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 28, 2010
Last Updated on October 29, 2010

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Forever Mine

Tahlequah, OK



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I'm Katie, i'm 18, and a senior in high school. I'm also happily engaged to my bf of two years. I love writing poetry, and i'm currently working on my book "Fall From Time", the prologue is posted rig.. more..

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