Tonights Validtiction
A Poem by
Forever Mine
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My life
Your bite
Liquid red
Dripping down
Stalking Night
Sleeping Light
Silky Love
Wonderous groom
Moonlight Skin
Ruby Lips
Perfect guy
Tonight's goodbye
Tactful lies
Painful Validictions
© 2010 Forever Mine
Author's Note
I'm reading Dracula right now, So I thought I would do something in the spirit of halloween
Reviews
perfect painting-
the sensuality/eroticism/and
bloody sexuality slithers creatively/
in this atmospheric piece !
:)
Posted 13 Years Ago
This flows real well. It's real easy to read, it just rolls off the tongue. Great work.
Posted 14 Years Ago
This flows real well. It's real easy to read, it just rolls off the tongue. Great work.
Interesting.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Interesting.
Very erie and mysterious are your words... very sensual and yet with a touch of pain.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very erie and mysterious are your words... very sensual and yet with a touch of pain.
Mmmmmmm. This sounded really good.....until the end!
Interesting stuff!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Mmmmmmm. This sounded really good.....until the end!
Interesting stuff!
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Added on October 28, 2010
Last Updated on October 29, 2010
Author
Forever Mine Tahlequah, OK
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I'm Katie, i'm 18, and a senior in high school. I'm also happily engaged to my bf of two years. I love writing poetry, and i'm currently working on my book "Fall From Time", the prologue is posted rig..
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