Desolate Love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Rain

The Thunder

The bliss of Lightening

There is nothing else like it

 

My world is like a fallen tree

Forever dead and disentegrating

My skin like a lizards' - rough

My hair like straw - Flat and Thin

My eyes like pools - deep and grey

My love did this to me

Help me;

From this desolate love;

slowly killing me;

I need my love

I want my love

Your love is my high

Author's Note

What love can do to you

Reviews

[...]

. beautifully written ... it's a gnawing sadness ... tough to cope with without courage and resilience ...

[paul]

these lines are very, very powerful
and all too famaliar...

[Tate Morgan]

IU like this but as I read it I think it reads much better if you remove help me Just a thought and not necessarily a good one

[Moonflower]

Beautifully expressed.

[luciddreamer]

Oh how I can understand this one.....great read :)
Peace
Robin

[Cherry Blossom]

The Picture is beautiful and so is the poem love can be so painful at times

[Ry]

Love is like an addiction.
This poem explains that perfectly.
Great job

[KatiePie]

I really love the construction of this piece, it changes the flow into something more, something better, and I like it. Beautiful work. Thank you for sharing.

[Short.Nerd]

Love it! and I love the picture you used

[David W Moore III]

Very moving piece. Love can make us whole, and love can tear us apart. This is a powerful example of the latter.