Desolate Love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The Rain

The Thunder

The bliss of Lightening

There is nothing else like it

 

My world is like a fallen tree

Forever dead and disentegrating

My skin like a lizards' - rough

My hair like straw - Flat and Thin

My eyes like pools - deep and grey

My love did this to me

Help me;

From this desolate love;

slowly killing me;

I need my love

I want my love

Your love is my high

Author's Note

What love can do to you

Reviews

[Shin]

There was emotion in this piece and I felt it, though I'm not really into love subjects.

[koty bell]

great write, pure, unadulterated talent. will u come check out my stuff and tell me what u think.

[Poetic Beauty]

This isn't what love can do to you but the what being without your love can do. It is all the other emotions that come along with love that make us feel lost and lonely. This is described with awesome detail and saddened beauty.

[heich]

sigh..love it..

[Klpindc12]

This is so good! You have a good way of showing your emotions in your writing.

[Steve]

Yes........nicely expressed!

[Sports Girl]

Picture fits with the poem perfectly. nicely done on the poem short but really good

[Poetry Girl]

the picture definitely matches the feel of th poem for sure. love can really cause people a lot of pain. especially when what you love is taken away. but you did a great job in writing this.

That picture is gorgeous. And the poem is very good.

[Art Sun]

Love is and can be as stormy as Nature...

nice...