My Curse

My heart cant help

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The mists swirl around my feet

                Creating an unearthly atmosphere

                                The swing creeks to and fro

As I sit on the swing

                My Feathers touch the ground

                                As I move back and forth

The air is thick and cold

                My dress is in shreds

                                From where I fell

My hair softly touching the feathers

                Feathers as soft as a rose

                                The color of a lily

My skin is fair

                My eyes are aqua

                                My hair is black

Everything around me is dead

                This is my curse

                                My punishment

My life here is never ending

                This is what I fell too

                                My heart can’t save me now

Help me someone

                Save me from this desolate place

                               Rescue me from this prison...

Rescue me from this place called Earth.

Reviews

[Cherry Blossom]

WOW WOW WOW THIS IS AMAZING POEM AND THE PICTURE WITH IT AMAZING WONDERFUL MUST READ!!!!! THIS GOES INTO MY LIBRARY

[SilentDreamer]

What a great poem. The imagery is so well done, you can picture everything that you say. And I love the picture you chose to put with it, awesome job.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. Photo made the words come alive. You surprise with the ending. The poem flowed with sadness and fear. Each line adding to the strong story. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[SimplyDisastrous]

Bravo! Excellent! I loved this piece! It reeks of beauty and sadness. Emotion was practically seeping from this. I love the description of the eeriness of it all. This is definitely a favorite of mine.

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

Dark and ethereal. This is the type of stuff I like to read when I'm in a somber mood. Me likey!

[Liz-z]

Very nice, interesting, poem. :) way to go!

[Patricia(:]

This is a very creative poem, I must say the way you wrote it was unique. I love this poem. It holds deep emotion to it. It's a very interesting poem, leaves the reader wondering..You've took me on a journey through this in my opinion Dark Angel's eyes..What a journey it was, this poem was very good. I actually very much enjoyed the ending, not because the poem ended, that was the tragic part. But the last line, 'Rescue me from this place called Earth.' I like that line, it really brings the poem together. Even thought it's the last line. Once again, very creative poem- very beautiful.

[Norma M Sutton]

A very interesting poem.

[Cherrie Palmer]

you captured the soul of this picture

[ANGEL.X]

wow i liked the idea of "hell on earth."
:) a really good poem.