Forever Trapt and Chained

Forever lost and trapt

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Waves crash against the shore

like hands beating on a drum - Consistent

 

Rain pours down in waves

like a pier during a hurricane - Never Ending

 

I am forever chained to this rock

Even though i hold the keys

 

I fell from Heavens grace

I'm trapped like Azazel

 

My love cannot come save me

for he cannot be spoken of

 

I had an affair with a forbiddin angel

For that i paid

 

The storm will never cease

for it is a reminder of my evil

 

He whose touch warmed me

is forever gone

 

The tender voice that carressed me 

is no more

 

I'm trapped here.

I cannot break free

 

Even if my love was....

An archangel 

Reviews

[Robyn]

trapped in the dark realms of your mind.
reminds me of a poem i wrote called lament
check it out
you would appreciate it!
nice work bringing out the strong emotions

[Jason Shadows]

Azazel Which Means "The Strong Hand Of God" But To Most Is A Demon Who Fell.
With The Emotions Of Falling For A Angel Is Forbidden Unless You Where An Angel. For Some Reason This Has The Power Of Greed And Lust Within. Showing The Hearts Real Feelings Can Be A Sin If Your An Angel.

This Is Great. I Will Review More When I Can. I Like It

[Cherry Blossom]

you should put this peace in a contest

[KatiePie]

What a metaphor.. beautiful work, really baeutiful.

[Crowley]

Dark and foreboding, love and lust gone wrong. Very vivid write, I liked the tone, it made me anxious reading it. Nice work.

[Robin]

the pain of living with ones mistakes ....

[Short.Nerd]

Really Loved this poem! Great job..

[Cherry Blossom]

its in my library this so dark and Beautiful

[Jonathan De Elvira]

This was touching and sad...I felt sorry after reading it..

My love cannot come save me"

for he cannot be spoken of



I had an affair with a forbiddin angel

For that i paid" I instantly hooked into this write after I read it....Great job...
I love the symbolic meaning behind every word you wrote...great Job Katie..

[Cherry Blossom]

OMG this is the most beautiful poem because you kicked it sometime's people think life is greener on the otherside but then they see that they where wrong and they dont have the words to feel what they feel when the person they did love gone way you found the words for them love love it wonderful