Forever Trapt and Chained

Forever lost and trapt

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Waves crash against the shore

like hands beating on a drum - Consistent

 

Rain pours down in waves

like a pier during a hurricane - Never Ending

 

I am forever chained to this rock

Even though i hold the keys

 

I fell from Heavens grace

I'm trapped like Azazel

 

My love cannot come save me

for he cannot be spoken of

 

I had an affair with a forbiddin angel

For that i paid

 

The storm will never cease

for it is a reminder of my evil

 

He whose touch warmed me

is forever gone

 

The tender voice that carressed me 

is no more

 

I'm trapped here.

I cannot break free

 

Even if my love was....

An archangel 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The storm will never cease
for it is a reminder of my evil

very gripping lines... the poem as a hole really delves into the fine line between good and evil that we all walk everyday.

[Ian Faraway]

I personally loved the mythology, fantasy, etc you add in your poems. Each one tells a little story but has a meaning that I can somewhat relate to. I don't have to be an angel to understand it :P

[David W Moore III]

I like this, We get a little of the story, enough to get hooked, just not enough to be mysterious. Well done

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

I really like this poem. A fascinating piece with great imagery. Awesome write!!!

Heather

[Ry]

"I am forever chained to this rock even though I hold the keys"
These are some of the most perfect lines that I have ever read.
Beautiful.

[Erin]

“ like hands beating on a drum – Consistant” It’s spelled “consistEnt,” not “consistAnt.” Just a thought on grammar…
Wow. This is a deep and epic poem. Amazing. Incredible. Your style really helps with the tone of melancholy and guilt. It’s really good. I like it; it’s gonna go in my library!
Great job.
PBP

[Moonflower]

This was a very good read, I like the way it seems to tell a story. I really liked the ending, thought provoking and deffinitly interesting.

[My Fair Lady]

Deeply emotional. I could feel aching. Very good.

[Poetry Girl]

this is a great poem. its very deep and shows a lot of emotions. its actually kind of a dark poem as if you're ashamed for you have done something wrong. great expression

[luciddreamer]

I love this write...very vivid imagery....good job :)
Peace
Robin