Forever Trapt and Chained

Forever Trapt and Chained

A Poem by Forever Mine
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Forever lost and trapt

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Waves crash against the shore

like hands beating on a drum - Consistent

 

Rain pours down in waves

like a pier during a hurricane - Never Ending

 

I am forever chained to this rock

Even though i hold the keys

 

I fell from Heavens grace

I'm trapped like Azazel

 

My love cannot come save me

for he cannot be spoken of

 

I had an affair with a forbiddin angel

For that i paid

 

The storm will never cease

for it is a reminder of my evil

 

He whose touch warmed me

is forever gone

 

The tender voice that carressed me 

is no more

 

I'm trapped here.

I cannot break free

 

Even if my love was....

An archangel 

© 2010 Forever Mine


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nice work


Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow...simply amazing I love it!! The picture sets up the whole mood! I love deviant art its amazing

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice and so right! This is truly epic and FANTASTIC! It as well for me to say....That the flow in this was wonderful. One of your best keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago


loved the pic.
nicely done

Posted 14 Years Ago


My goodness! This is beautiful. Simple words to describe a complex feeling. Beautiful, beautiful work, my dear. So proud of this poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


the read on this is exactly how the author must feel, the way it's constructed conveys the emotions of the writer

Posted 14 Years Ago


a never ending sounding flow along with the situation
the words seem almost tired as she's chained up
a good story with feeling

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this poem and the story you created for the character in the picture. It is a truly amazing what we can write from looking at a painting or a photo. The details are well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the use of consistent and never ending. Also, the Azazel reference is great. Again, thank you for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


That's nice, and I enjoy reading this.
Love this one.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on September 6, 2010
Last Updated on September 6, 2010
Tags: Fallen Angels, Angels, Love

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Forever Mine
Forever Mine

Tahlequah, OK



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I'm Katie, i'm 18, and a senior in high school. I'm also happily engaged to my bf of two years. I love writing poetry, and i'm currently working on my book "Fall From Time", the prologue is posted rig.. more..

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