Forever Trapt and Chained

Forever lost and trapt

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Waves crash against the shore

like hands beating on a drum - Consistent

 

Rain pours down in waves

like a pier during a hurricane - Never Ending

 

I am forever chained to this rock

Even though i hold the keys

 

I fell from Heavens grace

I'm trapped like Azazel

 

My love cannot come save me

for he cannot be spoken of

 

I had an affair with a forbiddin angel

For that i paid

 

The storm will never cease

for it is a reminder of my evil

 

He whose touch warmed me

is forever gone

 

The tender voice that carressed me 

is no more

 

I'm trapped here.

I cannot break free

 

Even if my love was....

An archangel 

Reviews

[Shin]

The pic was a nice touch, I could imagine it even better, the words you used were great, it had sadness but also inspiration, great work, I liked it a lot.

[Norma M Sutton]

I like the flow of this and the sadness.

[Voice]

This is an excellent piece. It sad but elegant in the way you have written it. Great write!!

Voice

[Steve]

Well done. I like this style of writing....

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. The mystery and conflict create a excellent story. I enjoyed the complete poem. The ending made the poem perfect. A outstanding poem. Photo made the words come alive.
Coyote

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Katherine,

I will agree with what others have already said, this is deep. Very dream like and surreal, a touching and sad write.

Well done,

Regards,

Matthew

[Cherry Blossom]

this is so heavy I still love this poem cant get it out of my mind

[kuru]

this is nice, i liked how the first two stanzas were written i thought it would have been nice if the rest of the poem was like that, it would've been a bit more powerful in my opinion.

[SimplyDisastrous]

This is DEFINITELY a favorite of mine. It seems so beautiful..so surreal. Dream-like. The deviant art picture at the top is also amazing. Really goes well with the story the poem's telling. Excellent job. As always.

[Liz-z]

First verses FANTASTIC!
"Waves crash against the shore
like hands beating on a drum - Consistent

Rain pours down in waves
like a pier during a hurricane - Never Ending"

Really liked it!

"I'm trapped here
I cannot break free

Even if my love was...
An archangel"
This poem was fantastically beautiful!

BRAVO!!! :D