Angel Omniscient

True knowledge....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My voice bleeds pain

Tears streaming down my face

 

The clouds overhead are omniscent

My eyes and wings forever changed

 

What used to be tri-colored

is now all black

 

My heart has stopped beating

my life no longer my own

 

I thought all were supposed to be happy

....even angels

 

I dared to love..

I paid the price....

 

My love is forever in hell

I chose to love a fallen

 

I may have fallen from heaven's grace

but i still feel

 

My wings may be black

but their still wings

 

They're still mine!

Reviews

[Norma M Sutton]

This is nice. I like the metaphors in it.

[Ry]

There is a lot of feeling in this poem.
Great job!
-El

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

sad but powerful to hold in the hands
beyond heartfelt

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

This is sad but beautiful. I absolutely love this poem, awesome write!!!

Heather

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Very depressing...in a good way of course...
nice portrayal of vivid imaging there....N also a good job on expressing your thoughts and emotional there...

[Cherry Blossom]

wow you did a wonderful job on this some one to take away your soul and love away but as angle no matter what wings you have its all your own no one can take them away and you can still fly away that ats what I got from it love it

[Robin]

angels work so hard ...

[Nova]

This was beautiful. Your word choice is very powerful and you conveyed those feelings well and quite quickly. great write.

[Ian Faraway]

I LOVED the sixth stanza. Very powerful. This, for me, is a very unique type of poem. It adds something so real with something fictional (angel wise)

[Erin]

Good way to end it, with a spark of hope! I mean, it started off sad and ended happy. You did a fantastic job with your transition of tone. Good job.
PBP