Angel Omniscient

True knowledge....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

My voice bleeds pain

Tears streaming down my face

 

The clouds overhead are omniscent

My eyes and wings forever changed

 

What used to be tri-colored

is now all black

 

My heart has stopped beating

my life no longer my own

 

I thought all were supposed to be happy

....even angels

 

I dared to love..

I paid the price....

 

My love is forever in hell

I chose to love a fallen

 

I may have fallen from heaven's grace

but i still feel

 

My wings may be black

but their still wings

 

They're still mine!

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Love the imagery and the emotion that is poured into this piece. It is a great scene that plays before my eyes.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

My wings may be black
but their still wings

They're still mine!

What an excellent ending... realizing that even the heartaches you experience are apart of who you are.

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and beautiful poem. Angels maybe dark and feeling the pain. But we need our Angels to be strong. I like the last lines. A powerful poem.
Coyote

[Liz-z]

"What used to be tri-colored
is now all black

My heart has stopped beating
my life no longer my own"

So very dark, nice description. Shows how much pain there is... :O Really good stuff you got here!

"I dared to love..
I paid the price...."
LOVE IT... Love does seem to have a price we have to pay for, doesn't it...?
Fantastic line! :D

The whole thing was very entertaining! and I loved it! Bravooo! =D

[SimplyDisastrous]

Damn. You love writing writing about Angels, don't you? Haha. Beautiful piece.

[Marie Harrison]

Nice work!

[KaySea]

nice. love the pic

[Brad]

that opening line rocked...set up the entire poem...only one correction: last line "their" should it be "they're" ?

[Michael of Gilead]

interesting write, doesn't quite come together for me, but if your wings(feelings) are still yours, then make them any color you wish

[Cassiopia Summers]

The two "their" in the last couple lines should actually be "they're". But other than that I love the poem, it has a hidden message sort of. And I like that. Wonderful poetry.