Guardian's Lament

Fallen......Angels..... Or.....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the rain hides my tears

the thunder hides my cries

My heart bleeds for you

That is why it storms

The Wings on my back are heavy

The water dripping off of them

The power flickers off and on

in sync with the lightening

The rain is washing the blood away

Washing away the pain....

If all im supposed to do is help

Why do i hurt so many?

My wings shouldnt be mine

They should be yours......

Reviews

[Marie Harrison]

Heart wrenching poem. To me this about much more than angel's wings.

[SilentDreamer]

Wow I really like the last two lines and the picture. Closes the poem well. Very nice, creative idea. Great job.

[Chilson, Joshua]

"Washing the away the pain...." "the" should be removed, the first one. This has great feeling to it, but selecting a title is something you find in yourself. Read it aloud and go back to how your felt when writing this and you will find your title. Keep it up.

[Shelby. Loves ya. :3]

wow great poem and pics.

[Coyote Poetry]

The photo made your words come alive. Your words create a powerful lost Angel waiting for reason and purpose. I like the description and story in this short poem. A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Michael of Gilead]

Supposed angel?

[Brad]

you'll never get the appreciation you deserve...this was a work of art...

title? hmmm
-broken angel
-guardian's lament
-beating of heart/beating of wings?

[Jonathan De Elvira]

cool...there's a taste of sorrow in this one...Urm, but somehow the fallen angel theme that you have put into this write sounds more soft and sad rather than the usual fallen angel theme I've read before....
good...

[Moonflower]

This was very good, fit the image well. "Synch" is spelled "Sync"...though that may have just been a typo. Good work, an enjoyable piece, doll.