Forever Mine you will Remain

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Forever mine you will remain

The Shadows move through the night

Nothing moves during light

 

Forever mine you will remain

My world is not your own

I am dangerous - a killer

 

Forever mine you will remain

The night comes alive with me

The blood is sweet - The skin is salty

 

Forever mine you will remain

You will never leave my side

You are addicted to me

 

Forever mine you remain

Till the day you die…

You will be mine

 

 

Author's Note

Sorry the pic is True Blood, This is the only one i could find that kinda fit the poem. lol Hope you enjoy

Reviews

Good poem!
I like it.
Reminds me somewhat of the Motley Crue song "you're all I need"
It's really,really good though :)

[Liz-z]

Favorite lines (just has to be) :

"The night comes alive with me"
Perfect, True Blood, lines! Personally I never watched it, but it sounds related to the subject; a line that sounds as if it's very related to the series. :)

"You will never leave my side
You are addicted to me"
... Loved it.

"You will be mine"
So possessive! I adored it! =D

[Daydreamer54]

Love it, it certaintly captures the series. (though i never seen it, but I think it does!) I like the pic to btw! :)

[Brad]

oooo, obsessive...yow!

[Jonathan De Elvira]

Hohohohoho!!!
Obsessed by love....
I'm liking it...

[Ladysue]

A good vampire piece...I like the repeating line in the poem...it gives a strong image...nice work...

[Poetic Beauty]

This reminds me of a vampire talking to a blood slave. I love vampires and anything paranormal so this poem is right up my alley. The flow of this poem is done well and I love the repetitive line in this poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Its a cool pic and goes well with the poem... what better to represent forever then vampires...

So much confidence in your verses and it certainly portrays the arrogance that vampires to possess.

An awesome little poem.

Absolutely chilling, it evokes amazing imagery. I find the whole Vampire topic a bit worn out but you’ve pulled it off.

[Cassiopia Summers]

It's all good, I love True Blood. (: Anyways, to the poem.

I think you did a good job, your descriptions were pretty good. I enjoyed how you repeated "Forever mine you will remain", it worked well.