Redemption

back on track

My soul was broken but it will heal stronger

I am finally free of you and no longer

Will I suffer from your choice of life

I have grown past all your bickering and strife

I am the happiest I have been in years

And I refuse to drown in tears

For a person that I have lost all respect

Your karma will no longer be able to affect

The path that I will now be able to choose

My determination is solid and I will not lose

To the way I use to be when I was with you

And revert back to the useless life I was used to

I have awakened from a recurring nightmare

I have broken my chains and won the mental warfare

I have finally stopped acting like the deceased

And your maggots can no longer feast

On my mind body and soul as I have completed my resurrection  

I am immune to your disease and have killed the infection

I have finally been able to purge your tainted aura

I have become strong enough to close Pandora

Now I can truly follow my dream

And return to a life that I must redeem

Reviews

[heartspeaks]

WOW! just WOW! hats off! the emotion is passing through each and every line . The pain , the heartbreak , the torture and trying to heal ... everything seems like poetry in motion... Grammatically perfect and poetically jawdropping .
The words used are superb and rhyming is amazing.

I have finally been able to purge your tainted aura
I have become strong enough to close Pandora

For a person that I have lost all respect
Your karma will no longer be able to affect

These lines just hit the bulls eye... I really loved it... Keep writing...

[Karmee]

AWESOME writing here!
love the rhyme flow...
I enjoyed the imagery

[Damien Ridge]

I can relate to this, having been through a rough relationship and also battling my inner self. Great poem it made me reflect quite a bit. Good use of words. Thanks for sharing!