Rainshowers

Tiny sprinkles of dew,

Big drop of rain,

running down the window,

leaving trails of water,

like a miniature river,

 

the cold,

the water,

the drops,

 

soaking the earth,

glistening under the moon,

sky of darkness,

shear happiness,

wetting my skin.

Reviews

[alesuriko]

I really enjoyed the flow of the second stanza. Very nicely done, it felt like it trickled down. Just like raindrops. Nice description. Well done.

[Dillon Cotter]

i really like the imagery and details of your rain showers.

-Will

[Nicole]

thank you, I don't really like it though...it isn't one of my best peices...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Brilliant in its simplicity... nothing like the rain to make you feel new... i love rain and i love this piece.