Thought of The Day

Thought of The Day

A Story by K C Milan
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Thinking on every moment of the day

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THOUGHT OF THE DAY
I spent almost all of my day. Sun has already set, darkness spreads out its canopy all around. Time for bed is fast-approaching. Like other human beings; I too would spend rest of the day and night sleeping without knowing anything else.
So far, I have gone through a number of times with different online news medias and know about road accidents, loss of lives, and receiving severe injuries.
I went out and walked by the high way, but haven't faced such kind of casualties.
I have contacted my family, relatives, and friends. Over the phone and through social medias. They all are safe and in good health.
I saw many people on the road begging, working hard in the scorching sun, but could not manage a meal at noon. I had more than enough, but could not finish eating. Knowing many people are anxious about tomorrow. What will they do? What will they eat?
I have my office, and work. Of course, thinking of doing all of my assignments perfectly. Not anxious about what I will do or what I will eat? As I know my maid would prepare my meal in time.
Is all this happening, because I am lucky? But the fact is I am not lucky. How can I consider myself lucky? As I have nothing in this mundane life?
I have no money, education, skill, good health, and appearance. Even, no tiny hut of my own to lay my head.
Still, I have no agony. As I know my God's grace, according to his word. I have God's invisible presence with me always and in every situation.

© 2015 K C Milan


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I liked the over all concept with your thoughts here to paper...you put towards the reader...as if they are the one in the lines of the story...as for the English grammar and the way...you put your word order can be redone...but I assume English is your second language...with that in mind...I would go back and touch-up your work...and give this piece more volume:

I spent almost all of the day. The sun has already set and dark spread out its canopy all around. Time for bed is approaching. Like all other human beings I too would spend rest of the day and night in sleep without knowing anything else.
So far I have gone a number of times through different online news medias and knew about road accidents, loss of lives, receiving severe injuries.
I went out and walked by the high way but I have not faced such kind of casualties.
I have contacted to my family, relatives and friends over phone and through social medias. They all are safe and in good health.
I saw many people on the road begging, working hard in the scorching sun but could not manage meal at noon. But I had more than enough meal I could not finish eating. I know many people are anxious about tomorrow. What will they do and what will they eat?
But I have office, I have office work. I am of course thinking of doing all of office assignments perfectly but not anxious about what I will do or what I will eat as I know my maid would prepare my meal in time.
Is all this happening because I am lucky? But the fact is I am not lucky. How can I consider myself lucky as I have nothing in this mundane life?
I have no money, no education, no skill, no good health, no good appearance, even I have no a tiny hut of my own to lay my head.
But still I have no agony as I know I have God's grace, according to His word I have God's invisible presence with me always and in every situation

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I spent almost all of my day. Sun has already set, darkness spreads out its canopy all around. Time for bed is fast-approaching. Like other human beings; I too would spend rest of the day and night sleeping without knowing anything else.
So far, I have gone through a number of times with different online news medias and know about road accidents, loss of lives, and receiving severe injuries.
I went out and walked by the high way, but haven't faced such kind of casualties.
I have contacted my family, relatives, and friends. Over the phone and through social medias. They all are safe and in good health.
I saw many people on the road begging, working hard in the scorching sun, but could not manage a meal at noon. I had more than enough, but could not finish eating. Knowing many people are anxious about tomorrow. What will they do? What will they eat?
I have my office, and work. Of course, thinking of doing all of my assignments perfectly. Not anxious about what I will do or what I will eat? As I know my maid would prepare my meal in time.
Is all this happening, because I am lucky? But the fact is I am not lucky. How can I consider myself lucky? As I have nothing in this mundane life?
I have no money, education, skill, good health, and appearance. Even, no tiny hut of my own to lay my head.
Still, I have no agony. As I know my God's grace, according to his word. I have God's invisible presence with me always and in every situation.

...I did a quick edit of your work...so you can see what I am saying and the rest is up to you to fill-in the blanks and make this shine through...good day...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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K C Milan
K C Milan

Bogra, Rajshahi, Bangladesh



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I am a Bangladeshi national, doing a job for a non-government but an international organization. I write news items for different online news especially for newsflavor.com I love writing. more..

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