Mom and Caralee

Mom and Caralee

A Story by KitKatMango
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Mother/ daughter relationship

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“Hey, mom, Igoing to go to Emma and Connors, okay?” I inform her as I enter the kitchen for the first time since I got home. 

She nods, clearly uninterested.

“Yeah, well, Ill be home whenever.” 

“You may as well just go over there, especially when you dont even bother asking if you can. Gah, I love it when you do that. Its adorable, really. Also, I like when you dont even say hello when you walk in the door. You should do that more often,” she sarcastically tells me with an icy glare. 

“Yeah, yeah, I know. My backpack is exhausting to carry around,” I lie, “and besides, youre just on the computer anyway… why does it matter if I came in here first? I might as well be productive.” 

“You will be home for dinner at six. Dont be late like last week,” she demands, “You will not be home whenever. When have I ever let you be home whenever youd like?” 

I dont say anything while I gawk at her and pull up a swivel chair to the kitchen counter. 

“What do you do at Emma and Connors anyway?” she pries. 

“Hang out,” I answered with a shrug. 

“Just like you and Louise?” My mom goggles at me. 

For some reason, my mom always liked Louise. I mean, I liked her too, but my mom seemed to wish that Louise was her daughter instead of me. I would be lying to say I didnt miss Louise… at the same time, Im enjoying her absence. With her not living here, I have my life to myself. Still, daily sleepovers and constant texting was fun. I guess I could say that being popular was cool, too, even though its way out of reach here at Black Forest. My life in Texas with Louise and the ice cream parlor are now just a vague memory. 

“No. Not like me and Louise.” Even I am surprised with my answer. When I notice her narrowed eyes, I add,” Louise and I knew each other longer- we could talk about anything,” Praise Louise… praise Louise… “Louise and I were better friends.”

Mom would hate to hear anything bad about Louise, her second daughter. 

Mom probably cares more about Louisefeelings than mine, her real daughter. 

“Since we are on the subject of Louise,” my mom looks up from her computer, “she called today.”

“Oh, when?” 

The last thing I wanted was to continue talking about Louise. 

    “Um, a half hour ago,” she shrugs.     

    “I was at school? She knows there is a different time zone, doesnt she?” I groan, remembering how easily she forgot about the time differences between us. 

    “She just wanted to let you know that she didnt need you to call her this week. Im not sure why… she may have a surprise for you!” 

    “Yeah, Im sure thats it. Weird, I wouldnt have called her anyway this week,” I confess to my mom. 

    “Why wouldnt you?” Her face had transformed into a concerned mother. Unfortunately, she was most likely more worried about our secret broken friendship- not me. 

    “Oh, you know; this is a busy week for me.”    

    She nods in an understanding that I dont perceive to be real, “I see. Well, she said something about-“

© 2012 KitKatMango


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KitKatMango
Can you tell that the mom and Caralee have an edgy relationship?
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Added on August 16, 2012
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KitKatMango
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