Want

I know it's strange, But i still want you.
And i thought you wanted me too.
But after yesterday,
I have nothing to say.
I wish you had given us a chance,
to have a real romance.
But you casted my love aside
And a small part of me died.
Like a unwanted pet,
unloved, forgotten, and yet...
I still have these feelings for you.
I wish you had them too.

Reviews

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again excellent emotion and this time the rhyme was perfect the only criticism i can off is that "Like a unwanted pet," the a should be an instead but i mean thats nit picking short simple and beautiful well done