Summer Breeze

Summer Breeze

A Poem by Kristina
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My escape!

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I miss the summer breeze, so calm and smooth it never leaves.
I can feel it on my face, its a memory I cant erase.
Trees slowly sway back and forth.
The sun shines and glows.
The trees are beautiful as they dance with the breeze.
Its like the world has found a little peace.
Today I sit and pray, that one day my life will bloom like a flower after an April shower.
Slowly it opens itself to feel the sun shining.
The flower is scared for one day it may be torn away.
It opens up anyway to living its beauty as each day is its last.
The flower so brave and beautiful.
Its freedom I see.
I observe the nature to its raw details.
Taking it in with every breath and heart beat.
I see so much beauty in this world.
If we could all just open our eyes look deep into the nature we might all be mesmerized.
Once again I long for the summer breeze.
The summer breeze always brings me to ease.

                                                                                                                                                                                           
                   

© 2014 Kristina


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Awe! This is my favorite so far on this site. I especially admire the way you gave a feel to the reader. Very well penned.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautiful flowing and yes, breezy feel to this one. I was almost there. Love the line ..living its beauty as each day is its last. Maybe we should all try that more. Wonderful piece of writing, thank you.


Posted 9 Years Ago


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This is beautiful. May you always feel a summer breeze.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Peace and wonderment do come by...
Lovely write my (absent) friend

Posted 10 Years Ago


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It's wonderful!... It brings so much peace as we read it!
It's freedom! 
And you definitely "see so much beauty in this world." Thank you Kristina for sharing your visions. 


Posted 10 Years Ago


Kristina

10 Years Ago

Thank you! Its relaxing!
A

10 Years Ago

It is! You are wecome! :)
The title , the poem and even the painting are all good...Thank you for penning...:)..............

Posted 10 Years Ago


Kristina

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much for your reviews!
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...............

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Added on January 4, 2014
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Tags: poem, nature, relaxing

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Kristina
Kristina

USA, OH



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