These Eyes

Just thoughts.

Look inside these eyes.
Can you see the history.
The pain that still remains.
The death and heart ache.
The loss the gain.
All these dark memories attempt to fade away.
Somehow they find themselves back into these eyes.
There is nowhere to hide.
Every day I want to break away.
Thought these eyes will always remain.

Reviews

[A. Amos]

Those Eyes, I like your title as seem so catchy and you really did nice justice with your poetry, good job

[Kristina]

Thank you!

[ron]

Beautiful poem. Full of emotion. I can sense some tenderness in your words. I love the poem thank you for sharing.

[Kristina]

Your welcome... thanks for reading!

[ron]

You are most welcome.

[Shaquana Adams]

People can definitely relate to this poem whether it be their eyes or anything else they have to look at. It's nicely written :)

[Kristina]

Thank you!

[Anand Sehgal]

very good, honest write :)
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[Kristina]

thank you!

[A]

This is really wonderful Kristina! Time goes by, memories may fade away but past makes who we are today. There's no way to run from it.

[Nicole Williams]

This dragged me in and didn't let go until the very last word. Beautiful.

[Kristina]

Thank you so much!

[Sami Khalil]

The title , the poem , the painting are all wonderful...:)......................

[Kristina]

Thank you so much for taking time to stop by and read and review. Greatly appreciate!!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........................