Heart Break

To Kena....who knows exactly how I feel all the time...I love you girl...we'll find our rainbow one day

 

 

salt filled tears

burning my cheek

staining my pillow

making it impossible to sleep

gasp for air

as the burning

reaches my throat

my heart breaks a little

wondering if you were a dream

that i finally woke from

would i find that wonderland again?

only to lose it

it breaks a bit more

the days go on

no chance of my dream

being reality

so i heal some

go on trying to forget

the hole you opened

in my soul

longing to belong

to fit in

it breaks a little more

until i wonder

how long before

it is forever broken

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Thank you girl! For putting me on the top. I appreciate it. Yes, we do understand how we feel. And I"m glad I could inspire you in whatever way I can. This poem takes your heart and soul and lays it down for everyone to see. You are a very kind and giving person, and it's so easy for us to be used and discarded, and taken advantage of.

I think you are true testament of a woman who writes for therapy, to purge out all the bad in her life. you have a gift, keep writing!!! And i'm always here for you.

[Isabelle Howard]

This was exactly how I felt two weeks ago, up untill two hours ago.
Beautiful.

[G]

I read your profile, your a success at life because your still alive. How successful no one knows until judgment day. No one knows your disappointments, but you. You are a creator so create. Oh, by the way the poem is great and no one is broken forever. Men get broken to.

[Mark D. Chevalier]

I agree with Kena. Writing is most assuredly therapy. And you showed a lot of guts to put your feelings out there in this poem like you did. I thought it was a brilliant mix of painful emotions and blinding pain.

Be well and be safe Kia, always,
Mark

[Wildecat]

A wonderful and well written poem, a pleasure to read, loved Kena's comments too. Well done.

[J.Black]

DAYUM, Nice work here!

salt filled tears

burning my cheek

staining my pillow

making it impossible to sleep

[San Herman Lopez a.k.a...]

WOW, very nice piece. You express yourself so well within these words. I felt your pain as if it was my own, as I too am heartbroken. Please I would love to hear your opinion on my two writings Water in my lungs & My Heart Bleeds... I look forward to reading more of your work.