Make Things Better

Make Things Better

A Poem by kbob
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It's amazing what we do for love...

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I sit here by the phone awaiting a reply

Anxious

Cold

Broken

But I’ll wait anyway…

 

These aren’t always happy endings

Alone

Hateful

Numb love

But I’ll make it happy…

 

I know that our lives have been beaten

Bruised

Heartbroken

Forsaken

But I’ll love her anyway…

 

When the world falls out of reality

Dark

Hell

Nothing

But I’ll still be there… with her

© 2008 kbob


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caleb this is yet another great piece!!! I wish i could say something really beautiful or touching, but i am kinda speechless right now...

keeep it up!

~may

Posted 15 Years Ago


This reminds of the nights I used to sit and wait for her to call. Nothing to do but think about her, and tell her about that as soon as she called. This also really tells about the pain from loving someone. I really like this! Nice piece and great read! :D

Austin D

Posted 15 Years Ago


I love this KBOB like I love all of your work. Are you ok though? I am really worried about you! Please be ok. Peace to you and the world. LeeLee

Posted 15 Years Ago


true loyalty.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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kbob
kbob

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