Take My Soul

I wrote this song for a English project. Wrote these lyrics in 10 minutes. The chords for this took longer. Also I'm not even a religious person. Try to guess what you think this song might be about

Chorus: Oh God take my soul

Oh God that points to me

Oh God take my soul

Oh please lead me

 

Verse 1: Sure a mark of Kane

Yet I want to be saved

No hell or pain

Tired of bein' a sin slave

 

(repeat chorus)

 

V2: Lead me to the light

Let Jesus show the way

Lead me through the night

Even on dark cloudy days

 

(repeat chorus)

 

V3: Oh God save my neighbor's soul

Even if they decline

Tell them to do as told

When in heaven we'll be fine

 

V4: Oh if you're ever lost

Look at heaven at night

Hell is too big a cost

Heaven will be right

 

(repeat chorus)

 

V5: I tell you my brother

Nothing is to fear

We're going together

No more hell is there

 

C2: Oh God take my soul

Oh God that points to me

Oh God take my soul

Take me to the mapple trees

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Let me know what you think

Reviews

[Crow]

Well done!

[Manda]

Wow this was awesome! It had a nice flow and the grammar was good too! Well done!

[Amanda]

Wow! This is amazing!