The Girl With A Good Name

The Girl With A Good Name

A Poem by Karthik Bhandare
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A track for "The Fallen" for their debut album. A song written during college days.

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it was hard when i first stepped in class
after those 6 months wondered if this wud ever last
had a lot goin in my head, nd knew it was gonna be hard
where do i begin, how do i start.

every morning was the same
the feelin of pain bein felt again nd again
i felt like i didnt want ny bit of it
but had to wait nd c if this was it

i was really scared
as i didnt knw anyone
i thought abt many things
& wondered how wud i get it done

the first few dayz were no different
but as dayz passed by, things slowly started to change
in wht way or how,i dont knw
but i cud only feel it nd in a long time

i kept thinkin it was gonna be worst
but not until i met this gal
i had a bad feelin abt it the first time
but as time flew by, it was goin just fine

i have never seen her
nor have i heard her name
i only knew she hated the place
coz u cud c tht pretty clearly from her face

she wud do her work quietly
help out people whenever neccessary
wud wait like every 1 of us for the period to get over
& walk out of the class like it was the last day ever

months passed nd i never spoke
time was nearly out, only a few more seconds to go
last day of xam nd i was out really fast
there she was all alone, finally atlast

i had only 1 choice
walk out or get out tht good old voice
for a while it kinda drove me insane
but next min there i was speakin to the girl with a good name.

she's nice nd sweet
noticed tht from our very first meet
she really beautiful,u cud it in her eyes
somethin i found really hard to deny

we spoke for months together
from college life to how much we hated stayin in here
i got to knw her like i never did in my whole life
wht i've heard from others, honesty or true lies

she wud fall sick a couple of times
nd it wud last for a week
like tht it wud trouble her
but somehow she wud b back on her feet

i wud call her up those days
nd say "heyyyyy"
with a soft sweet voice
she wud reply the same way

she wudnt call her mum
coz she wudnt want her to get all worried
instead bare all the pain
nd sleep it off till all of it was buried

she kept sayin tht she misses home
every time she was alone
nd i wud tell her "just a yr to go"
nd like tht she wudnt say it nymore


so i say to the gal with good name
u got nothin to worry abt...
im rite here,just waitin to hear ur voice...
coz u knw how beautiful tht is...

to the gal with a good name
how you doin, r u sure u k?
you want some time,take all u want...
while i'll b rite here finishing up ur song

to the gal with a good name
you've been sad all these dayzz
i know a lot of things have gone wrong...
so cheer up everytime you read this song

you look at me
and you walk away
with a smile
i can hardly see on ur face

i feel so sad
and i dont knw wht to say
tht makes me go mad
but i make sure ur not hurt in nyway

i know its hard
just for the both of us
tryin to move on
but it surely never works

we can only pretend
that we r just friends
but deep down inside
im sure u knw wht it meant

so i say....

to the gal with a good name
you got nothin to worry
you've got a gr8 future,& a beautiful life
you just havent read ur whole story...

to the gal with a good name
when ur feelin alone
just dial the no
& i'll answer the phone

to the gal with a good name
im all here if u wanna talk
and if tht doesnt work out
mite as well take u out for a walk

so i say to the gal with a good name
how u doin, r u sure u ok?
but whn her moods off,i guess i got no chance...
i just walk upto her nd ask if u wanna dance....


© 2011 Karthik Bhandare


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Wow so amazing, and creative.

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so great...welcome!

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Karthik Bhandare
Karthik Bhandare

Mangalore, Karnataka, India



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Hi everyone, Im Karthik Bhandare (KB) ;)..well i luv playing d keys nd piano nd crazy abt making music. I play keyboards, piano,drums & the tabla..;)..Its all i know about i guess. Nothing else crosse.. more..