Gone

Fictional poem.

I'm nothing.
Well I am something,
But I am fading into oblivion.
Becoming nothing.

So if you think about it,
I am nothing.
I have nothing to work for,
I have no dreams.

And so now I continue my fade,
Into oblivion.
And before you know it,
I'm gone.

Reviews

[forevermore1218]

even though it is very short, this poem brings out a lot of inspiration into the reader's mind. In a way we all fade away, just some sooner then others. You just proved that point in a very creative way.

Loved it :)

[None]

I like this. Nothing is redefined and reasserted in a new way each time you say it. It's somewhat like a "nothing" spell. Great work.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I agree that this is relatable for some people. This is actually really good.
The title goes great with this, and the flow's outstanding.
:D



Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Lydia]

Very relatable. Good work!

[Mockingbird]

conveys despair and hopelessness. very sad.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A short but highly compact piece that relates well.