I Don't Know Why I Still Love You

I Don't Know Why I Still Love You

A Poem by that-little-green-monster

I don't know why I still love you,

When all you ever do is hurt me.

You call me names,

Mock my appearance,

I don't know why I still love you,

When everyone says I should hate you.

 

I hate it when you call me names,

Makes me feel simple minded.

I don't know why I still love you,

Because whenever you speak to me it's in condescending tones.

 

I don't know why I still love you,

Maybe I'm afraid of being alone.

© 2012 that-little-green-monster


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It sounds to me like there is a difference between love and dependence. We as people find comfort in what is familiar. The fear comes from, "if you weren't there, what would be?" In one's mind, it seems there would be an empty void. You have to love yourself enough to not need another person to be happy, to not feel lonely. Best of luck and I hope you do what you need to do, to find what you're really looking for.
I like this piece, it's direct, well worded and very relate-able.
'Captain

Posted 12 Years Ago


Loving the last line alot! some people need to realize

Posted 12 Years Ago


alot of people have felt this, you expressed it perfectly. great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


A perfect expression of, in m opinion, the most painful question. love does not explain itself. It just never ends, even when you wish it would. Great work. Touching openness.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great. So many people can relate to this. I know I can. Well done TLGM. Well done indeed. Adding to my favorites.

~Alex

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 7, 2012
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