Our Time Is Now

Our Time Is Now

A Poem by kayluhfayy11
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this is the song i wrote after d********g deven and he decided that he wasnt ready to get rid of me:)

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Of all people i know, I know that it's hard

to find who you really are and who you're gonna be.

(What will I be)

So let's just give in, and run with the wind

We'll find our place in time.

Time for a rest.

Time for a nap.

Time to bury the hatchet and stop holding things back.

Time to call it a day, and go with the wind.

Time to breathe out and take everything in.

Time for some healing, time to call for some help.

Nows the time to slow down and figure things out.

Cause our time is now.

We both gotta raise that flag.

It's time to say goodbye.

Let's just run away from here.

I just want to be free.

(I want to be free).

Time to be free and time to let go of us.

Time to be a separate you and me.

I don't regret you, you've taught me so much.

There's just one thing you gotta know: I will always love you.

© 2009 kayluhfayy11


Author's Note

kayluhfayy11
Tell me whatcha think:) BE HONEST!!

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I completely agree with Jasiel Moreira, this could easily be turned into a song. Very nice work! :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sounds great! I like the words as they express nice thoughts. My favorite line is "Time to call it a day, and go with the wind. Time to breathe out and take everything in"... Good imagery. It could definitly be a song if you put your mind to it and some chords. Great write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 17, 2009

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